KuroRai (black lighting)

**Lucifer** · Subject: KuroRai (black lighting) Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:09 pm

Name:Kurorai

Appearance:His appearance is that of a large 15 foot tall wolf,with black fur and deep red eye's his fur has white streaks down one side and red streaks down the orther side he has no shadow and in the heaven's and orther realm's he appear's in his true from that of a 15 foot wolf but in earth he appear's as a small white dog that is about 1 foot tall with white eye's and white fur

Type of Creature:Devil wolf

Elemental Affinity:Darkness and Lighting

Creature Abilities:

Darkness dweller:Kurorai has the power to bend shadow's to his will he can make weapon's out of the shadow to attack with,or create monster's out of shadow's to attack with this power is much weaker in the daylight hour's as there are less shadow's.

Lighting breath:Kurorai can shoot bolt's of lighting from his mounth and also wrap it around his body increaseing his defense he can generate lighting and electricity from his own body,as well as draw in nearby sources of electricity to increase his own power this however has a limit as it put's great burden his body after useing it for more then two post in a row his body weakin's and he can no longer move or fight

History:Kurorai was a heavenly wolf that came to the human realm once every 500 year's,his fur was snow white and he had white eye's he met lucifer at a small lake in the human realm where he has resting kurorai could speak human as well as the god's speech,he spoke to lucifer and asked him how long he was going to hate every liveing thing lucifer ignored him and flew off, lucifer came back later and found Kurorai laying there dieing he was attack by a god who wanted his white fur his fur had been skined off lucifer spoke to him saying "you can live if you drink my blood what's will it be dieing a coward's death or liveing as a demonic wolf what will it be" he cut his arm dripping his blood kurorai drunk from the devil king's blood no longer being a heavenly wolf becomeing devil wolf his white fur was gone but pitched black fur grew back in it's place and from then onward he became thedevil king's Companion.

**Dagomis** · Subject: Re: KuroRai (black lighting) Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:18 pm

Lucifer wrote:

Name:Kurorai

Appearance:His appearance is that of a large 15 foot tall wolf,with black fur and deep red eye's his fur has white streaks down one side and red streaks down the orther side he has no shadow and most of the time appear's as a small white dog

Type of Creature:Devil wolf

Elemental Affinity:Darkness and Lighting

Creature Abilities:

Darkness dweller:Kurorai has the power to bend shadow's to his will he can make weapon's out of the shadow to attack with,or create monster's out of shadow's to attack with this power is much weaker in the daylight hour's as there are less shadow's.

Lighting breath:Kurorai can shoot bolt's of lighting from his mounth and also wrap it around his body increaseing his defense he can generate lighting and electricity from his own body,as well as draw in nearby sources of electricity to increase his own power this however has a limit as it put's great burden his body

History:Kurorai was a heavenly wolf that came to the human realm once every 500 year's,his fur was snow white and he had white eye's he met lucifer at a small lake in the human realm where he has resting kurorai could speak human as well as the god's speech,he spoke to lucifer and asked him how long he was going to hate every liveing thing lucifer ignored him and flew off, lucifer came back later and found Kurorai laying there dieing he was attack by a god who wanted his white fur his fur had been skined off lucifer spoke to him saying "you can live if you drink my blood what's will it be dieing a coward's death or liveing as a demonic wolf what will it be" he cut his arm dripping his blood kurorai drunk from the devil king's blood no longer being a heavenly wolf becomeing devil wolf his white fur was gone but pitched black fur grew back in it's place and from then onward he became thedevil king's Companion.

There are some problems with this creation:

1) 15 feet tall - What happens when you descend upon earth? When, a God descends they enter into a human-like form, so your wolf would probably kill you if it were that big. So, you should at least give him different size for earth and the heavens.

2) Lighting Breath - You need to tell what the limit for the burden is, by just putting the words there you could easily just continue it for an entire battle without his being burdened.

**Lucifer** · Subject: Re: KuroRai (black lighting) Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:26 pm

Fixed it i think

**Dagomis** · Subject: Re: KuroRai (black lighting) Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:29 pm

Lucifer wrote:

Name:Kurorai

Appearance:His appearance is that of a large 15 foot tall wolf,with black fur and deep red eye's his fur has white streaks down one side and red streaks down the orther side he has no shadow and in the heaven's and orther realm's he appear's in his true from that of a 15 foot wolf but in earth he appear's as a small white dog that is about 1 foot tall with white eye's and white fur

Type of Creature:Devil wolf

Elemental Affinity:Darkness and Lighting

Creature Abilities:

Darkness dweller:Kurorai has the power to bend shadow's to his will he can make weapon's out of the shadow to attack with,or create monster's out of shadow's to attack with this power is much weaker in the daylight hour's as there are less shadow's.

Lighting breath:Kurorai can shoot bolt's of lighting from his mounth and also wrap it around his body increaseing his defense he can generate lighting and electricity from his own body,as well as draw in nearby sources of electricity to increase his own power this however has a limit as it put's great burden his body after useing it for more then two post in a row his body weakin's and he can no longer move or fight

History:Kurorai was a heavenly wolf that came to the human realm once every 500 year's,his fur was snow white and he had white eye's he met lucifer at a small lake in the human realm where he has resting kurorai could speak human as well as the god's speech,he spoke to lucifer and asked him how long he was going to hate every liveing thing lucifer ignored him and flew off, lucifer came back later and found Kurorai laying there dieing he was attack by a god who wanted his white fur his fur had been skined off lucifer spoke to him saying "you can live if you drink my blood what's will it be dieing a coward's death or liveing as a demonic wolf what will it be" he cut his arm dripping his blood kurorai drunk from the devil king's blood no longer being a heavenly wolf becomeing devil wolf his white fur was gone but pitched black fur grew back in it's place and from then onward he became thedevil king's Companion.

Everything is alright, except for a few spelling errors.

Approved!

**Lucifer** · Subject: Re: KuroRai (black lighting) Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:32 pm

Thank you yeah im working on that my spelling is as bad as my grammer