Name:Cronos Lucifer



Age: 6666 Look's to be in his mid 20's



Location: Limbo




Personality: Lucifer is a whimiscal arrogant man with a sarcastic nature and is never frightend of anything,even if confrounted with his own death. most of the time he is a very cruel and angry person rarely showing any kindness at all,when around orther's he know's well he show's a diffrent side of himself he doe's not normaly show and can be quite kind.when he fight's if the oppenet is weaker then he is he will go out of his way to humilate that person and can sometime's cause the fight to turn around in h is enemy's favor
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Race: Devil the first and original one




Appearance:Lucifer has red hair that almost look's as if it's on fire that goe's clear down his back he away's leave's it messy,Sometime's he wear's it in a ponytail.He has narrow crimson red eye's with slit pupil's that glow from time to time.His body is that of a tall well built man in his mid 20's beside's the fact that he has two black angel like wing's and a set of black horn's that normaly are not seen.





History/Background:Lucifer was born as a higher ranked god thn most,named lucifel.but due to his cruel and uncareing nature and all the problem's he caused was banished from the realm of the god's became the first devil the devil king Lucifer.He lived in the human realm for 100's year's causeing suffering and pain upon human's,to vent his anger after being kicked out of his home he was well know and feared by human's as the king's of limbo.he spent his life wondering the human realm fighting tooth and nail with god's and demon god's alike although he felt anger and hatred toward every liveing thing he also felt dispair and lonelyness,as he watched human's suffer without him doing a thing.It was then when He came across a land being tormented by a demon god and a demi god who defened the land he felt something watching this something he had not felt in age's he,fought by the demi gods side the demon god was crafty though and was not above useing people for his own gain he controled the human's leaveing little they could do to fight,back he was causeing the people to suffer and lucifer's new friend as well.This however was the last thing the demon god would do as it caused lucifer to fly into a rage,destroying everything in sight even his friend he was able to stop with the help of his friend who's last word's where "lucifer don't think so badly of youself" after he died lucifer once again wondered the human world thinking about what his friend last word's meant.he was approched by a god who promised him passage into the god's world if he where to kill and collect energy from, 200 evil spirit's that lurked in the human world he went and cleared this task in one mounth the god had double crossed him however and tried to have him killed lucifer was not killed and almost killed the god and now wonder's comtenplateing his exisetence.

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